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Kilravock
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Kilravock


Posts : 176
Join date : 2012-04-07
Location : Kilravock Scotland

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PostSubject: First character    First character  EmptyTue Apr 10, 2012 3:48 pm

WELCOME! You have been selected to become a part of Camelot Boarding School. Please fill out the following form about yourself!

REMEMBER: All students here are legacies of either sorcerors or kinght bloodlines. Unknownst to the modern world, beasts often plague this world. These beasts are magical and therefore, nly magical people can see them. Knights are magicless and rely on weapons. Sorcerors used to be a lot more powerful in the past. Now, the powers are limited. One may be elemental or have magic over love. No magic can bring back the dead. And no love magic is permenant nor very strong. All powers have limits.

Name:Zachary kilravock
School year: 10
Gender:maleI
Date of Birth:10/7/97 so he's 14
Place of Origin:kilravock,Scotland 
Hair Colour:brown (really dark almost black)
Eye Colour:green/brown
Height:5:8
Physical Description:medium build 
Talents:swordfighting, knife throwing, marksmenship, herding sheep, building forts, running
Flaws:afraid of black magic/ can get to involved on the battle/afraid of needles and hights
Sorceror or Knight?:knight
Magic style (Sorceror only. Please explain as carefully as possibly about the magic type):
Hobbies:swordfighting knife throwing cross country
Personal History*: As a boy Zachary was always interested in his family history an discovered that his family came from a strong lineage of knights. He was also interested in swordplay. After that he concentrated on becoming a knight and tried to find a school for this purpose. But alas he didn't find one until the day that he calls the day of tragedy. On that day his family died of 'natural causes' so he ran out on the road and came across this school.
RP Example*: I ran as fast as I could not looking behind me you didn't have to look to know there was danger close. Then a trench appears in the distance I run to it jump in and look around for the danger that had been trailing me. Then right behind me I heard a sword being drawn and saw a rogue knight behind me. He raised his sword preparing to slash me and I jumped at his legs knocking him over. I then drew my sword and held it at his neck panting.
Notes:is not shy loves to impress his superiors 

* means NO LESS THAN FIVE SENTENCES.


Last edited by Kilravock on Mon Apr 16, 2012 5:03 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Zachary
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Join date : 2012-04-08

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PostSubject: Re: First character    First character  EmptySun Apr 15, 2012 12:07 pm

Your RP example isn't five sentences long, and you don't have three flaws.
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Kilravock
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Kilravock


Posts : 176
Join date : 2012-04-07
Location : Kilravock Scotland

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PostSubject: Re: First character    First character  EmptyMon Apr 16, 2012 9:41 am

Fixed
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Tink
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Join date : 2012-04-07

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PostSubject: Re: First character    First character  EmptyMon Apr 16, 2012 10:43 am

You need five sentences in your personal history.
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Kilravock
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Kilravock


Posts : 176
Join date : 2012-04-07
Location : Kilravock Scotland

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PostSubject: Re: First character    First character  EmptyMon Apr 16, 2012 5:04 pm

Fixed
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Join date : 2012-04-07

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PostSubject: Re: First character    First character  EmptyMon Apr 16, 2012 5:08 pm

I'll accept it for now, though Shan may spot something when she next comes on. If she doesn't, consider yourself accepted.
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